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Naomi
is 75% done
The story is really nice setup, with the two timelines told separately.
However the conversations are not really realistic and the 1644 storyline is even worse in that regard. Like the writer wanted to make it sound realistically old language, which doesn’t feel natural at all…
— Jan 19, 2026 12:57AM
However the conversations are not really realistic and the 1644 storyline is even worse in that regard. Like the writer wanted to make it sound realistically old language, which doesn’t feel natural at all…
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