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Page 30 of 323 [Chapter] 5 - This story has good pacing but the transition from present to past just happened. I think it was humorous, but it still felt a bit disjointed.
— Jan 19, 2026 04:42AM
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[Chapter] 26 - I'm not exactly sure what I was expecting but I was hoping for more than this. While, the story seems decent and the characters are great there is something stagnant about the flashback portion of the story. I was expecting more of The Bad Seed or something. This is a bit lackluster so far.
— Jan 19, 2026 09:11PM
