Lyndsey’s Reviews > The Ritual > Status Update

Once again this book has no reason to be this damn long. Frankly I'm bored of the repetitive sex interrupting the sparse plot. If you insist on 600 pages at least give the reader more plot segments

The erotica is decent but at 300 pages there's only so much you can do without just rehashing the same scenes again and again. She falls on her handcuffed hands and it hurts, she gets tied down and they bone roughly.

And the actual plot is barely there in between it. There is no reason for this book to be this long, especially as the start of a series