Pinky’s Reviews > Girl Dinner > Status Update

Sloan is lowkey a dumbass I’m ngl. Why would you reveal you’re about to tell authorities once revealed that your boss’ sorority holds cannibals.

Ok finally something interesting is happening YAY

Ok so need to add this note. I don’t know how a book manages to both move too fast and slow at the same time but here we are. Halfway and no truly clear plot. Like what is happening.

It’s getting better but still need a plot!

Ok here’s my criticism thus far. So far the book is too ‘real’ way too much references to the kind of shit you see on tik tok and while I kind of get that’s the point, it’s kinda too on the nose sometimes – whereas I was looking forward to more world building elements even if it’s contemporary you know? I guess I should known by the books title that it would be heavily referency

It’s going slow because the writing style (the unnecessary interjections using the m—dash) are genuinely annoying as fuck and make it so you have to read a sentence 2 times to remember the original point. It just doesn’t flow. FUCK!