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Mel (Epic Reading)
is 44% done
By telling us the initial story the whole plot is (presumably) given away. Thus I’m a bit bored…
— Jan 20, 2026 03:17AM
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Mel (Epic Reading)
is 55% done
So this is cute… almost too cute? And just a bit too superfluous. Did I really need our MC story again in a narrative form she tells someone else? Not sure I learned much from it… and it could have been cut with her revelation written a different way.
I dunno if it was me I’d have edited this very differently for content.
— Jan 21, 2026 05:24PM
I dunno if it was me I’d have edited this very differently for content.
Mel (Epic Reading)
is on page 150 of 416
There is far too many little fairy tale comments in here. I don’t need like 5 of them a chapter. And I certainly don’t need our MC thinking about all the things something ‘could be’ and listing them off (ie; poisoned apple, glass coffin, etc.). It’s just too much. Kingfisher does it better with her subtle references.
I’m still enjoying this just not as much as I could.
— Jan 18, 2026 04:40PM
I’m still enjoying this just not as much as I could.
Mel (Epic Reading)
is on page 10 of 416
I feel like I should know this fairy tale… but I can’t recall it…?
— Jan 11, 2026 01:00AM

