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Elin
is 50% done
Maybe I'm being too hard on this book but I feel Merq's attitude and maturity has remained the same over the years, even though he got older. The author also does a lot of telling instead of showing. I'm still intrigued though so there's that.
— Jan 27, 2017 02:15AM
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Elin
is finished
I liked the idea behind the story, but I found the execution lacking. Merq doesn't truly progress as a character over the years. He's cocky and jaded at age 16 and he's the exact same in his thirties. Armise is interesting only because we're not in his head. Also, they never came across as mortal enemies, even though Merq keeps insisting that they are. Special Forces - Soldiers does a much better job, to be honest.
— Jan 28, 2017 05:40AM
Elin
is 30% done
I'm reading the most recent edition, but the scene transitions are still jarring, in that there is no transition. I feel like I have to orient myself every time. Not necessarily a bad thing, but if the first edition was even more confusing....
— Jan 27, 2017 02:09AM
Elin
is 20% done
They sure hooked up fast. I'm still unclear on what brought them together, other than that they're both a side of the same coin.
— Jan 27, 2017 02:06AM
