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Midniteillusion
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Like seriously?! The way it's written not ONE of the dozen or so people besides Candy know it's a bible verse??? Even if people aren't religious most know what one is written like. John 10:16 It's pretty standard writing format.
— Jan 27, 2017 05:53PM
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Midniteillusion
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--hers towards the end. She knew she needed to find herself. She could say no about the baby, about moving too fast and he would listen. I feel like if you take out West this book could have been the addition I felt Better When It Hurts needed. That little bit of push to round out these two and their story. To know that they are getting their HEA and will be alright.
— Jan 27, 2017 06:01PM
Midniteillusion
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I'm happy that the threesome wasn't too much, I thought the whole book was going to be just the three of them having sex and thankfully it was only one scene and West only got a bj out of it. I wouldn't have liked it if he'd had sex with her even with both she and Bleu being okay with it. There was some further character development for Blue which I think he really needed, but I was mostly happy with --
— Jan 27, 2017 05:58PM
Midniteillusion
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FINALLY the voice of reason!!! She NEEDS TO FIND HERSELF! Glad she's telling him no for once and standing up for herself. No to having a baby. Yay!
— Jan 27, 2017 05:42PM
Midniteillusion
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And this comes back to my point earlier and at the end of the last book. Love and sex can't fix everything, she needs help. She need a therapist. She feels like she is floundering and failing everywhere but the bedroom and that's only because he tells her what to do there. Still very sad and heartbreaking when she should be in love, be happy. Not always feeling on the edge of falling.
— Jan 27, 2017 05:20PM
Midniteillusion
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The sleeping side by side by side after the PTSD nightmare is good. I like this bit. Nothing sexual. Just companionship.
— Jan 27, 2017 04:51PM
Midniteillusion
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I hope I continues to like Candy as much in her own book as I have up to this point. She seems wise, much older than the rest but I'm sure she's not old in years.
— Jan 27, 2017 04:37PM
Midniteillusion
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And this whole baby thing??? She's just barely got her GED, the're both really young, why can't he wait until she's done with school? It's not like they'll be old. He's not even asking her, just telling her. I'm not sure I like this. I really don't like how the author developed Blue. I feel like the Blue we first met is is missing and this one is just a shell.
— Jan 27, 2017 04:00PM
Midniteillusion
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This kind of makes me sad. I don't want Blue to share her. I want Blue to keep Hanna to to himself.
— Jan 27, 2017 03:49PM

