Kadi P’s Reviews > The Merchant of Death > Status Update
Kadi P
is 35% done
- Stuff is happening which is better than nothing happening, but it’s all happening at a snail’s pace.
- I feel like the narration is really bogged down with the world building and the wimpiness of the protagonist.
- This could eventually go somewhere good, but it’s just too long so I’ll be happy if I manage to finish this and don’t DNF it.
— Jan 24, 2026 08:03AM
- I feel like the narration is really bogged down with the world building and the wimpiness of the protagonist.
- This could eventually go somewhere good, but it’s just too long so I’ll be happy if I manage to finish this and don’t DNF it.
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Kadi P
is 25% done
- Reading this for Middle Grade Madness’ TBR Challenge 2026 task 9: Read a book about a rebellion or uprising.
- Bobby is a wuss and it’s kind of annoying.
- The narration is repetitive. I’ve never seen the word craggy used so often!
— Jan 03, 2026 01:49AM
- Bobby is a wuss and it’s kind of annoying.
- The narration is repetitive. I’ve never seen the word craggy used so often!
