Branomander YT’s Reviews > The Deep > Status Update

Re-reading for a review. So far, a whole lot of bumbling around. And flashbacks. And terrible characterization. And horrible dialogue. And pointless hallucinations and dream sequences. And it sucks because I know where this is all going - NOWHERE!

I just wish Luke would have gotten The Gets. That way he would have amnesia and we wouldn't have to endure the flashbacks, and the resultant pacing problems.