Elithanathile’s Reviews > Tangled Up In You > Status Update

// I speed read this book ... I just wanted to see how things would progress and HOLY SHIT ...

// On second thought ... I'll read a little bit more ... let's see how things progress ...

// Okay, you ever meet someone and it doesn't matter what they do, they just annoy you and rubbed you the wrong way?!? Well, this book is that "person" for me :-/!! The typos and grammatical error are obnoxiously overlooked; the writing is stilted, odd and juvenile, and well, I can see this continuing and ending very badly. I do believe I'll be tapping out :-/!!

// Details on each victim are on par with how it would work within a homicide division ... all except for "stabbed many times" ... don't they normally specify exactly HOW MANY TIMES, when casing the victims and profiling the unsub?!!? Odd but hey, I might be wrong. I don't think I am, but I might be ...

// Last ditch pre-read effort: Book, PLEASE don't make it so one MC gets hurt because the other MC is too stupid to say anything :-/!!!

Now, let's begin ...

// Continued ...

Tripp fits the profile, things are happening to him, and Garrick doesn't want to say anything until he's sure?!!!!? Are you fucking kidding me?!!!? This better NOT be a case of his withholding info that could potentially harm Tripp!!! I mean it even says so in the blurb!! Holy shit, this book better not piss me off with large amounts of stupidity :-/!!

// That quote [see previous update] was in the blurb. I'm sure anyone can see my issue with that :-/!! Here's the thing:

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// "When the relationship starts to get serious things start happening to Tripp. Garrick knows that it's the murderer, since Tripp fits the victim's profile perfectly.He doesn't want to tell Tripp until he knows for sure. One night when Tripp goes to the club, he is kidnapped while Garrick and his team are on their stakeout."

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