Status Updates From Tangled Up In You (Miami Ho...

I t h ink I'm going to stop here. I don't remember it being this bad the first time I read it. While I liked the story, idea, the book is all over the place. It needs some serious time put into editing and structure. If done properly this could have been a fabulous book

// I speed read this book ... I just wanted to see how things would progress and HOLY SHIT ...

// On second thought ... I'll read a little bit more ... let's see how things progress ...

// Okay, you ever meet someone and it doesn't matter what they do, they just annoy you and rubbed you the wrong way?!? Well, this book is that "person" for me :-/!! The typos and grammatical error are obnoxiously overlooked; the writing is stilted, odd and juvenile, and well, I can see this continuing and ending very badly. I do believe I'll be tapping out :-/!!

// Okay, I don't want to sound like a "hostile reader", but this authors writing is stilted and odd; the typos aren't helping any either. I hope things tighten up :-/!!

// Details on each victim are on par with how it would work within a homicide division ... all except for "stabbed many times" ... don't they normally specify exactly HOW MANY TIMES, when casing the victims and profiling the unsub?!!? Odd but hey, I might be wrong. I don't think I am, but I might be ...

// Last ditch pre-read effort: Book, PLEASE don't make it so one MC gets hurt because the other MC is too stupid to say anything :-/!!!

Now, let's begin ...

// Continued ...

Tripp fits the profile, things are happening to him, and Garrick doesn't want to say anything until he's sure?!!!!? Are you fucking kidding me?!!!? This better NOT be a case of his withholding info that could potentially harm Tripp!!! I mean it even says so in the blurb!! Holy shit, this book better not piss me off with large amounts of stupidity :-/!!

// That quote [see previous update] was in the blurb. I'm sure anyone can see my issue with that :-/!! Here's the thing:

- Continued ...

// "When the relationship starts to get serious things start happening to Tripp. Garrick knows that it's the murderer, since Tripp fits the victim's profile perfectly.He doesn't want to tell Tripp until he knows for sure. One night when Tripp goes to the club, he is kidnapped while Garrick and his team are on their stakeout."

- Continued ...

I know authors work hard writing a book and I definitely couldn't do it but this book needs some serious editing. Forget all the spelling and grammar issues (honestly, that's hard to do) but the sentence structure needs real work.

I made it through two chapters but it hasn't been easy. Still quite a few grammatical errors. I feel like an editor would have cleaned up the errors but also fixed the story and sentence structure. So far the story doesn't flow, it's just random paragraphs of descriptions about various people. I need a break already.

I was told this book and been edited and I should give it another chance. It does have fewer mistakes but still has several only one chapter in. At least I managed to read the first chapter so far!

I was told this book and been edited and I should give it another chance. It does have fewer mistakes but still has several only one chapter in. At least I managed to read the first chapter so far!

This books sounds so good but I'm struggling to get past 3%. The grammar & poor spelling are out of control already this early.