Heather’s Reviews > Tangled Up In You > Status Update

I know authors work hard writing a book and I definitely couldn't do it but this book needs some serious editing. Forget all the spelling and grammar issues (honestly, that's hard to do) but the sentence structure needs real work.

I made it through two chapters but it hasn't been easy. Still quite a few grammatical errors. I feel like an editor would have cleaned up the errors but also fixed the story and sentence structure. So far the story doesn't flow, it's just random paragraphs of descriptions about various people. I need a break already.

I was told this book and been edited and I should give it another chance. It does have fewer mistakes but still has several only one chapter in. At least I managed to read the first chapter so far!

This books sounds so good but I'm struggling to get past 3%. The grammar & poor spelling are out of control already this early.