Summerfire’s Reviews > The Will of the Many > Status Update

First major complaint: that duel scene was poorly written. I believe Vis was attacking Ianix's Amotus but it was written that he was attacking Ianix himself - which a) is against the rules and b) doesn't make sense in the context of the end of the fight. So what is HIS Amotus doing? Unclear. I get what he was trying to depict but what he wrote uhhh doesn't depict that.