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Joyce
is 25% done
Other notes:
-I don't understand why she doesn't like Stark. She literally hated him from the second she saw him and he was just giving out instructions!
-I don't like that she already has a love interest because obviously, she's not going to end up with Lee.
-I don't understand why she needs to go to the "front" to find her sister. Nothing has ever indicated that her sister will be there?
— 3 hours, 1 min ago
-I don't understand why she doesn't like Stark. She literally hated him from the second she saw him and he was just giving out instructions!
-I don't like that she already has a love interest because obviously, she's not going to end up with Lee.
-I don't understand why she needs to go to the "front" to find her sister. Nothing has ever indicated that her sister will be there?
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Joyce
is 37% done
The language is really taking me out of this story. When she says, "Well shit..." and "The fuck?", it's a modern way to curse. Just takes me out of this confusing world that's been built. The first 10% of the book feels nothing like the rest of it.
— 56 minutes ago
Joyce
is 16% done
A few things:
1. This reminds me of Fourth Wing. I did not like Fourth Wing.
2. The plot is so mechanical. People talk like robots and there are inconsistencies (i.e., FMC claiming another character is fighting dirty but attacking a girl, but you’re supposed to be doing anything to get to the top).
— 5 hours, 26 min ago
1. This reminds me of Fourth Wing. I did not like Fourth Wing.
2. The plot is so mechanical. People talk like robots and there are inconsistencies (i.e., FMC claiming another character is fighting dirty but attacking a girl, but you’re supposed to be doing anything to get to the top).
