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mars
is on page 247 of 368
i’m being continuously bothered by this major plot hole in the beginning of the book. She says her name is River Picard but when they leave the “space ship“ she says her real name, but then later on she says her name is River Picard again and so it’s just tripping up my brain a little bit. It’s just like a plot hole that kind of bothers me because like everything seems so high stakes.
— Jan 27, 2026 08:46AM
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mars
is on page 287 of 368
i’m still mad about the plot hole but I guess they somewhat fixed it? I’m realizing there’s probably a lot of like a little Easter eggs in this book that I’m not understanding because I never read the first one, but that’s on me but so far the plot is enjoyable, but for some reason, the main characters anxiety has like disappeared when it was a major plot point.
— Jan 29, 2026 09:28AM
mars
is on page 90 of 368
Also I never read the first book, so I have no clue what they’re talking about.
— Oct 26, 2025 09:05PM
mars
is on page 90 of 368
The MC is really annoying. I get it. It’s all different but there’s this weird hero mentality and it’s annoying to read. Also her inner dialogue is annoying as well. Just an annoying teenager ig.
— Oct 26, 2025 09:04PM
