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muddy
is on page 70 of 1030
so far. everything is tell tell tell tell. even the stupidest of details are told. example - women wearing excessive and lavish dress: narrator explains the women is the excessive and extravagant and must be new to money. could have i come up with this conclusion by myself from just the imagery???? yes. but author needs to tell everything god damn thing
— Jan 29, 2026 10:26AM
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muddy
is on page 351 of 1030
i don’t know why this was allowed to be published the way it is?
— Feb 01, 2026 10:22PM
muddy
is on page 245 of 1030
so far this book is just bad and i haven’t even gotten to the fucked up stuff yet. the writing is so bad. it’s so bad😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
— Jan 30, 2026 06:53PM
muddy
is on page 32 of 1030
i picked this up mostly to torture myself and judge it. so far the first 30 pages have been intense info dumping about the science of magic as a women has been pulled from a torture stasis chamber 👍🏻 i think everything is supposed to read as mcabe but to me it is reading as silly
— Jan 29, 2026 09:54AM

