Crystal’s Reviews > Slaughter > Status Update

The writer had potential, but didn’t know how to make us start liking the H so she suddenly makes him care about her when the beginning of the book is about how much he hates her and wants her to pay for what she’s done. I wish authors knew a way to transition their traditional enemies to lovers bc the sudden twist of you’ve built up how much they hate each other to them loving each other makes no sense.

They instantly somehow at 50% go from hating and can’t stand each other to now. He cares about her and wants to cuddle and she wants to be around him all the time it’s hinted that she has been trafficked in the past, but you’re not really sure because it only gives us glimpses into the past so her snapping and not understanding what’s going on doesn’t make sense being her dad’s a trafficker

This book falls into what I called. The author doesn’t know how to resolve the storyline, the hatred, the anger, perfect at the beginning they both hate each other, used to love each other amazing. She is hinting that she’s been hurt in the past. She doesn’t really care because she’s a very jaded and has a very bleak outlook on life. She’s a strong heroin because of her past and at 50% it goes downhill.