Ayo’s Reviews > A Long Game: Notes on Writing Fiction – A Practical Guide to Character, Revision, and the Blank Page from 35 Years of Teaching > Status Update

“The greatest difference between short story and novels is in character. We spend so much time with novel characters and they are and should be larger and deeper in every way.

This is why a writer should ignore the inevitable readerly reaction to an excellent story - that has a lot of characters and takes place over a number of years - “this should be a novel”.

No it shouldn’t.”

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“A good second person is uncanny and complicatedly bossy.

You’re told to do things or you’re told you’re already doing things. The narrator is issuing commands but is also in your head - instructive, dislocated.” 😍


LOL!!! This is why a lot of readers don’t like the 2nd person perspective. Folks don’t like being told how to think 🤣

“Don’t follow writing advice like a recipe.

A cookbook’s goal is to teach you how to create a soufflé that looks pretty much like other people’s soufflés which makes sense for soufflés.”

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