average human’s Reviews > Phixmery > Status Update

Wtf. This book is so clunky. Like most of the story is being told through internal turmoil vis the female leads thoughts. It doesn’t flow.

My head shakes of its own accord. No, this wasn’t how this was supposed to go. I was supposed to go on a hunting trip and then come back once they left. They can’t find out about my magick.

He strips the rest of the vines from me and I watch with dread as he draws out a dagger, using it to cut away my threadbare tunic, slicing me in the process. The cold against my naked flesh makes me shiver, my skin prickling as it’s exposed to the elements.
I vaguely register the noises of other fae gathering around to watch the spectacle.