Kim’s Reviews > The Conditions of Will > Status Update
Kim
is 31% done
Liking the story so far, but all of the side bars, internal monologue, psychological descriptions of facial features and reactions are a good bit overdone. They make the dialogue or scene last much longer.
— Jan 31, 2026 02:30PM
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Kim
is 78% done
This book could have been so much better without the dramatic love affair interspersed so much throughout the entire book slowing down every single situation and conversation. Ugh! I want to see how this one ends, but it is a struggle.
— Feb 04, 2026 04:06AM
Kim
is 75% done
We’re at the part where I am ready to speed up the audio because I’m over the side romance piece that slows down the story so darn much. It is extremely repetitive too. We know! He looks at you!
— Feb 04, 2026 03:44AM
Kim
is 66% done
The YA-level relationship dynamics are weighing on me. No shade at YA, but it is immature while trying to be so mature.
— Feb 03, 2026 10:33AM
Kim
is 63% done
Dramatic and maturely immature somehow. Got repetitive for a while too.
— Feb 02, 2026 05:50PM
Kim
is 27% done
Liking it so far although the internal monologue and side bar commentary makes every conversation painfully long.
— Jan 29, 2026 06:52PM
Kim
is 13% done
Saw this book mentioned several times in an IG post. Interesting so far.
— Jan 27, 2026 07:09PM

