ThunderheadLass’s Reviews > Across the Ages > Status Update

The amount of times I 've rolled my eyes & scoffed at the story is racking up! It feels like an early rushed draft of a story idea not fully fleshed out & lacking good feedback. I've been tempted a few times to quit, but now I'm curious to see if it continues to go downhill. We get so much telling instead of showing, & our heroine is incredibly naive for being 20 years old.