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The utility with cliches is you can say s lot with a little, so why are we getting 3 entire chapters of cliches and archetypes. Either make it more complex or make it shorter.

Also: HOW big/little is this town???
Feb 02, 2026 11:59AM
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Morgan
Morgan is 84% done
a summary of the book so far: water is wet
Feb 03, 2026 01:39PM
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Morgan
Morgan is 58% done
“She tells them everything [that she got SA’d]” (which tells us almost nothing) was a missed opportunity. I would rather know what she says, and how she says it, and how they react and respond (not just “and it changed everything”)

Maybe it comes later but it really seems like 1 we’re not being able to really experience the story without the narration intervening, and 2 a weird emotional cliffhanger
Feb 03, 2026 12:36PM
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Morgan
Morgan is 58% done
listening at 2.2 speeds whole i do anything else, its bearable

but its not interesting or entertaining
Feb 03, 2026 10:54AM
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Morgan
Morgan is 36% done
Feb 02, 2026 04:49PM
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