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Rin is on page 236 of 480

Another editing error. Unfinished clause within a sentence. I'm starting to wonder if this was edited by chatgpt. There's nothing on this book that makes it look like an arc. I think this is the actual published version

— Feb 02, 2026 08:55PM

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Rin is on page 202 of 480

Continuity error! How can she never have heard a gunshot in real life when she shot a pistol like 2 chapters ago? 🤔 Then one chapter later it reminds us of her shooting the pistol. So like... Wtf. Editor: this was your job to catch.

Also I think they flipped Adeline and Tian's names in a scene.

Editor. Once again. This is your job

— Feb 01, 2026 10:01PM