Becca’s Reviews > A Flicker in the Dark > Status Update

Thank god the detective told Chloe to stop cause she's not helping, it's what I've been thinking forever and I feel like she feels like she's the only one who can find the killer cause she happened to help incarcerate her father when she was a child, it's so annoying!! Also I'm 100% sure her fiancé is cheating.

I think she's suspecting the wrong guy again, it'd make sense with the way she's thinking but I think it's too obvious! Plus I think he's cheating on her, it makes sense for the whole going away for meetings and events all the time!

I don't think Bert did it, I think it's too coincidental and obvious for it to be him - it's definitely somebody else!

Okay so we're finally starting to get into the present day plot! The writing has improved a little for these past few chapters as well, which has helped my attention span!

Look, I enjoy the flashbacks to her childhood and meeting her fiancé, but I just can't stand the writing style. It's getting on my nerves.

I'm not really enjoying the writing style, I feel like every other emotion, person, object & past event is over described and it's diverting the plot from moving forward and the chance to bond with other characters

I'm not really liking the style of writing, it feels more like a description on anything and everything just to get the word count - than to actually move along the plot or to help us get to know the character