Chaos_ensuing’s Reviews > Noor > Status Update

Man it’s a good thing big evil company made a recording of themselves talking about their evil capitalist schemes and then as an experiment (with no oversight) purposely disabled a girl twice over to manipulate her into cybernetically enhancing herself, giving her the ability to hack all their technology and all tech in the world with her mind so she could find the video and out it to everyone. Truly great writing

Was it really necessary for the evil company to give AO’s mom olives that would cause birth defects in her daughter and then subsequently run her daughter over with a self driving car to make someone who is disabled enough to willingly get cybernetic enhancements? And why her? This is so convoluted could they really not have found a single volunteer to get badass cybernetic enhancements willingly?

Omg third random person shows up and monologues their entire life and history and the evils of capitalism Im losing my mind

Omggg I thought the story was finally starting and we were getting our first actual scene but no. She met a random guy on the street and badgered him into talking to her and now we have to sit through him monologuing his entire life story and the history of his people to her now.

Lollll what a very natural way to do your worldbuilding, just have your main character recite an entire podcast episode by heart explaining how all their new sci-fi technology came to be. I feel so immersed in this world lol. Still wondering when the story is gonna start though