EliMess’s Reviews > An Unwanted Guest > Status Update

I'm waiting for something. Anything. As the reader I'm in every other characters POV and there's a lot of them (so unnecessary) but none of them seem to have any idea about who "killed" her or if she was even killed at all. This has been underwhelming so far. And NO tension. Come on! A "who done it" gotta have some suspense! Something other than the frozen snow outside the hotel. Yawn.