Gary Peterson’s Reviews > Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon? Light Novels, Vol. 9 > Status Update

Losing interest... the whole Guild scene with hitherto unknown boss reaming Eine was awful. Wiene the most annoying character this side of Lilly. Determined to press through all 19 volumes, but without a turnaround and a reset it won't be easy...

Too many characters! Aisha showing up was a nail in the coffin. Too many gods too, like this Iseltor or whatever... I miss the early days of the first couple books. Wiene running out into the streets deserves everything that befalls her. Nothing but contempt and loathing for her now. I'm Team Lilly on this one.

Omori's style so ponderous. So much hesitation, looks, silences. Plot not moving forward briskly like Reki K's book. Too many characters! Weine an interesting character/monster, but I'm not sold yet. Series still on DSP.