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Feels rude to complain already but... oof. I'm not loving the prose. It's passable. But a bit grating. That doesn't bode well for me lol.
— Feb 06, 2026 05:51AM
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Ugh. The Regent saying Laurent was a "lovely boy" sure makes my skin crawl. IYKYK.
— 11 hours, 44 min ago
Tori
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At this point, I can't say I'm rooting for either of the main characters. It feels very “lesser of the two evils.”
I care about Erasmus and the other slaves, though. Gods that scene with Damen and Erasmus!! Good stuff. Horrible. Interesting. I wanna see more of it.
— 15 hours, 26 min ago
I care about Erasmus and the other slaves, though. Gods that scene with Damen and Erasmus!! Good stuff. Horrible. Interesting. I wanna see more of it.
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Feb 06, 2026 06:17AM
Yep!! The prose is ehhh... something. 😬
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Athami wrote: "Yep!! The prose is ehhh... something. 😬"You did warn me 😔🥲 I thought the plot and characters would beguile me enough to overlook the prose but this is gonna be a struggle, I fear.
Gods, I do love how instantly detestable Laurent is though.
