Fiona Carder’s Reviews > Cat Dragon > Status Update

The writing in certain scenes is a bit clumsy. It makes understanding what is actually happening difficult- it’s happened a few times now. It feels like the author knows what is happening but doesn’t know how to properly translate that to the reader- like we’re going from A to C and there’s information missing. Where did the wizard come from? Why is he here? Did he follow them? Why? He’s just there suddenly

We’ve reached ‘one bed’ trope levels 😞

While Alo is a fantastic character, Hollis still has the personality of a pencil shaving, but okay.

I do not like Hollis. Put your shirt down SIR!

Not the cottagecore dream house!

Not sure how to feel about bro. He feels a little to standard brooding male love interest for me so far, but hey. Maybe I’ll find out differently.

This entire time I thought the guardian was human shaped like a Titan made of plants, which felt out of place in the story for me. Finding out it’s a dragon makes a lot more sense in the worldbuilding.

The man the myth the legend has entered the chat.
And it ain’t good

Unique and Whimsical. I like the characters and their descriptions so far.