Luna’s Reviews > These Violent Delights > Status Update

Ehhh- The story is decent but the writing is all over the place. Sometimes there’s an excellent section but then it switches to Juliette’s POV and none of the many metaphors make any sense. I’ll be reading a phrase over and over wondering if I’m too dumb to get it, only to realize the phrase is too dumb to be understood. It’s annoying and frequent enough that I always feel on the verge of DNF.