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Ayo
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“Should she have eaten more blueberries? less butter? Read more books? You don’t remember ever seeing her read a single book although they were always piled high on her night stand. . .”
I now understand why we are often told in writing workshops not to use the 2nd perspective for extensive writing. This felt like a cute writing exercise.
Don’t come for me. That’s an actual compliment 😂🫢🥰
— 15 hours, 26 min ago
I now understand why we are often told in writing workshops not to use the 2nd perspective for extensive writing. This felt like a cute writing exercise.
Don’t come for me. That’s an actual compliment 😂🫢🥰
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Ayo
is 61% done
“Having an unrealistically positive attitude will not stop it and may in fact hasten your decline . . .”
The poetry and lyricism in this is sheer beauty and so gorgeous! 😍
However it distracts and distorts the story. Is there even a story here? I’m half way through and still questioning if this is fiction or just poetry 😂
— Feb 07, 2026 03:02PM
The poetry and lyricism in this is sheer beauty and so gorgeous! 😍
However it distracts and distorts the story. Is there even a story here? I’m half way through and still questioning if this is fiction or just poetry 😂
Ayo
is 31% done
“And what we lack in horizon and sky, we make up for in tranquility . . .”
I love the ‘we’ perspective - very rare technique. However what exactly is this book about? 😂
What is ‘the crack’? 🫠
— Feb 07, 2026 10:24AM
I love the ‘we’ perspective - very rare technique. However what exactly is this book about? 😂
What is ‘the crack’? 🫠
