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ripley ✨
ripley ✨ is 41% done
God this dialogue is so bad also this is not gothic I need people to look up the definition of “gothic” before slapping it on their book lmfao
20 hours, 5 min ago
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ripley ✨
ripley ✨ is 80% done
The use of pregnancy loss in this book is very weird and I don’t think I like it
17 hours, 25 min ago
Humboldt Cut


ripley ✨
ripley ✨ is 57% done
“[redacted]. It was a shame he was dead. He was so hot. Tall and manly looking, like a cartoon lumberjack. [redacted] barely knew him. Which didn't make what happened to him any less of a tragedy. The top of his head had been taken clean off. But it hadn't been clean at all.”

This is an example of the many dumb paragraphs in this.
19 hours, 2 min ago
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ripley ✨
ripley ✨ is 30% done
The dialogue in this is not great but the plot is riveting so far so it’s outweighing that.
21 hours, 29 min ago
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ripley ✨
ripley ✨ is 22% done
Girl what the fuck
22 hours, 3 min ago
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