Lauren Brough’s Reviews > When the Moon Hatched > Status Update

The TikTok girlies said this was top tier but it was very bad. I can’t get behind this annoying FMC, the plot was all over the place. It got better as it went on but I could not stay interested in this and won’t read the next book. This made me mad the same way brimstone did

Happy this one is almost over. “Great flirt”, “moonbeam” (as a nickname), “fate herder”… could we not be a little more creative?? This is borderline insulting to my intelligence 😂

I picked this up because it was being described as a romantasy with complex world building. I thought I signed up for something a little more cerebral. This has the complexity of an adult Dragon Tales 😭

I’m a professional hater now I guess? Not him calling her MOONBEAM in bed 😭 I hate Rave I’m sorry

The thing about this is that I don’t care about it

Why is every FMC in these TikTok romantacy books the same?? Dark hair, light eyes, pale skin, super thin but still has boobs and an ass and somehow super strong and super horny and super skilled in battle all at the same time

Hoping to finish this before Feb 20