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That’s the second time I held my breath for an entire chapter!

I have to stop for today because of the symbol at the beginning of chapter 51. I almost screamed.

When your brain finally realises they chose an ancient Egyptian symbol because the setting is inspired by antient Egypt. As if desert, pyramids and scarab amulets weren‘t clear giveaways from the start.

I think I forgot how to breathe the entire chapter. Do I… do I like racing plots in my stories? (Flashbacks of Star Wars Episode 1)