Miranda Honfleur’s Reviews > Mystic and Rider > Status Update
Miranda Honfleur
is 42% done
I really wanted to like this book--swords and sorcery and romance!--but it's very slow paced. Hardly anything happens... It's just travel, camp, exposition via dialogue, Cammon senses something, Kirra and/or Donnal shift, lather, rinse, repeat. Occasionally they go somewhere and talk to someone new before going back to travel, camp, talk, travel... I'm still listening to it on audio, waiting for something to happen.
— Feb 07, 2017 09:56PM
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Miranda Honfleur
is 12% done
The first chapter drew me in... a barkeeper planning to rob a few travelers blind. Ha, not so simple, buddy.
But wow, the first scene of Chapter 3--why?! It was like watching paint dry. The author used the excuse of a new character among the mains to explain, and explain, and explain... There were just paragraphs of exposition in dialogue, the main characters turned encyclopedia. Excruciatingly slow.
— Jan 19, 2017 06:58AM
But wow, the first scene of Chapter 3--why?! It was like watching paint dry. The author used the excuse of a new character among the mains to explain, and explain, and explain... There were just paragraphs of exposition in dialogue, the main characters turned encyclopedia. Excruciatingly slow.
