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Naomi
is on page 300 of 433
of all scenarios to contemplate suicide, this makes the least sense. you can tell the author shoehorned a bunch of ridiculous shit to make it seem like everyone abandoned her (how tf do you casually forget your flight is in an hour so you have to leave without telling anyone? how does ur grandpa conveniently die but dw its not traumatic because the focus is emmas depression and no one elses?)
— Feb 11, 2026 06:09PM
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Naomi
is on page 361 of 433
How about pink?’ Sara suggested.
‘I don’t do pink any more,’ I blurted quickly
‘Stupid toes. Who cares if they’re painted anyway?’ she huffed under her
breath. The corner of my mouth rose.
oh shes so special and different because she doesnt like nail polish or pink and she hates wearing dresses and partying even though she's gone to every party in existence with a dress stupid hoe.
— 2 hours, 45 min ago
‘I don’t do pink any more,’ I blurted quickly
‘Stupid toes. Who cares if they’re painted anyway?’ she huffed under her
breath. The corner of my mouth rose.
oh shes so special and different because she doesnt like nail polish or pink and she hates wearing dresses and partying even though she's gone to every party in existence with a dress stupid hoe.
Naomi
is on page 350 of 433
‘She’s … different,’ he responded, choosing his words carefully. ‘But I like her. She’s not predictable.’
I couldn’t deny that she was beautiful, even in just jeans and a tank top.
shes not like other girls bullshit
— 8 hours, 35 min ago
I couldn’t deny that she was beautiful, even in just jeans and a tank top.
shes not like other girls bullshit
Naomi
is on page 301 of 433
AND WHY ARE YOU EMO AND SUICIDAL OVER COLE DOING EXACTLY WHAT YOU TOLD HIM TO DO???? ("leave me before i hurt you." 'ok *leaves*' "OMGGGGG EVERYONE HATES ME I NEED TO KMSSS") ?!?!??!?
— Feb 11, 2026 06:10PM
Naomi
is on page 250 of 433
the authors forgotten emma cut her hair to her chin shes suddenly being desciribed as having long flowing curls lmao. i also don't understand the point of the POV changes, because its not like we're hearing their thoughts or we're getting anything relevant, it just changes the pronouns and makes it confusing to understand who's talking. and they switch every two paragraphs.
— Feb 10, 2026 07:29PM
Naomi
is on page 240 of 433
oh yeah totally, because the alcoholic who was bedrotting for over two days, refuses to wear any makeup and quit exercise and sports FOR 2+ YEARS and is constantly described as 'skinny thin slim skinny skinny thin' suddenly has bronze, toned skin and looks SOOOO hot in a bikini that all the boys literally stopped and stared and dropped their jaws and said "woah....." BITCH STFU
— Feb 10, 2026 06:08PM
Naomi
is on page 228 of 433
WHY the hell are they ALL ganging up on evan and sneering and saying he shouldnt be here and that he ruined emma??
*EMMA* left evan because HER DUMBASS COULDNT BE HONEST WITH HIM and she felt guilty so she left abruptly to make HIM hate HER. because she thought EVAN was too good for her.
SO HOW THE HELL DOES IT MAKE SENSE THAT EVEN SARA IS SNUBBING HIM AND JUSTIFYING EMMAS ALCOHOLISM??!?!?
— Feb 08, 2026 03:25AM
*EMMA* left evan because HER DUMBASS COULDNT BE HONEST WITH HIM and she felt guilty so she left abruptly to make HIM hate HER. because she thought EVAN was too good for her.
SO HOW THE HELL DOES IT MAKE SENSE THAT EVEN SARA IS SNUBBING HIM AND JUSTIFYING EMMAS ALCOHOLISM??!?!?
Naomi
is on page 155 of 433
SHE'S DRINKING AT HER MOMS FUNERAL. Emma i could smack you
— Feb 05, 2026 07:00PM
Naomi
is on page 144 of 433
i dont understand why theyre all tip toeing around her like her ass is made of diamonds and gold or something. Shes acting very unstable and clearly needs help but they 'pale and quiver' when she pushes them away and yells. what????????
— Feb 05, 2026 03:10PM
Naomi
is on page 120 of 433
cliff diving because shes so brocken and unfeeling i hope she hits her head on the rocks
— Feb 02, 2026 09:06PM
Naomi
is on page 110 of 433
"His minty breath floated to my nose."
there is not a single person in the whole universe who naturally wakes up in the morning with minty breath. and especially not shirtless with perfectly tanned skin and swept back blond hair this mf not real.
— Feb 01, 2026 07:28PM
there is not a single person in the whole universe who naturally wakes up in the morning with minty breath. and especially not shirtless with perfectly tanned skin and swept back blond hair this mf not real.
