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the plot: i feel bad having to carry mulitple generations of trauma so im gonna deposit all of the memories onto my community and fuck off and have no memories.

the plot TWO PAGES LATER: i know these languages and also remember the history i abandoned :3

man wtf wtf wtf this is ragebait. this is fucking ragebait

getting INCREASINGLY frustrated with the lazy and convenient worldbuilding for nitpicky reasons. i don't think sloppy world design does your story justice and im getting really annoyed at the book for not embracing being a fictional, fantastical story. i get u have points to make but why write a book and not an essay? stop neglecting ur fiction 3

it's interesting so far but it's dpoing the thing where it focuses too much on it's commentary/themes and neglects aspects of he story and world and so on and im frustrated af by that

lowk really not enjoying the writing style or the worldbuilding yet