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is 51% done
The amount of typos and weird grammar continually take me out of the story. Frustrating to say the least.
Gouging instead of gaging?
There needs to be some kind of break or recognition of time lapses, that’s a bit confusing. Also, continuity of positions of their bodies make no sense in some of the spice scenes.
She’s against a window, then the next sentence she’s against the wall? Now it’s a glass wall?
— Feb 13, 2026 03:21PM
Gouging instead of gaging?
There needs to be some kind of break or recognition of time lapses, that’s a bit confusing. Also, continuity of positions of their bodies make no sense in some of the spice scenes.
She’s against a window, then the next sentence she’s against the wall? Now it’s a glass wall?
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