Ryan’s Reviews > Daggermouth > Status Update
Ryan
is 40% done
world building not convincing. Hypothetically I don’t comprehend how this regime has the power it claims if MMCs dad started it max 30 years ago? don’t add up. The mask bit doesn’t add anything to the story because the dystopia isn’t actually explained
It talks a lot about the division of gov but no actual explanation on how it works? Lots of reviews like omg just like today, to that I say bitch where
— Feb 13, 2026 09:16PM
It talks a lot about the division of gov but no actual explanation on how it works? Lots of reviews like omg just like today, to that I say bitch where
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Ryan
is 12% done
-prediction the brother is alive and working for rebels and the dad knows
-I don’t get why they don’t just kill psycho dad there are many opportunities, he sucks and MMC would probably be a natural next step in leadership and could fix the system but hey I’m just a girl with a third party perspective
-is the word antiseptic an adjective?
-the back tattoo sounds like the tackiest thing on earth
— Feb 11, 2026 10:48PM
-I don’t get why they don’t just kill psycho dad there are many opportunities, he sucks and MMC would probably be a natural next step in leadership and could fix the system but hey I’m just a girl with a third party perspective
-is the word antiseptic an adjective?
-the back tattoo sounds like the tackiest thing on earth
Ryan
is 5% done
Well I’m not super into the hella bloodthirsty murderous FMC classic at the moment, but I am excited about this one the writing is decent and I assume girlie is going to have an *evolution*
— Feb 09, 2026 10:17PM
