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Helen
is on page 325 of 528
It’s got a little better, the writing is still something to be desired, way too much repetition and redundant sentences, with some strange ways to describe things. Also some disjointed scene where I’m struggling to follow the movements of characters. The spicy scenes are good enough but not the best I’ve read, although there are a lot of them. I am however really enjoying the storyline and characters…
— Feb 19, 2026 04:53PM
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Helen
is on page 35 of 528
The writing isn’t great, it’s rather immature and there are lots of redundant sentences. Not busy in the way of description other than some clothes and the thrones, but other than that I’m struggling to visualise the setting and characters. The plot for the moment is the only thing keeping me going, the only steamy scene so far was Luke warm and again not very descriptive…
— Feb 18, 2026 05:16AM
