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Jack Dittbrenner
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Finished chapter : landscape with flatiron
This was a beautiful slow burn scene that introduced 3 completely new characters in a full circle scene. Imagery of a bonfire on a beach in the winter was written so well that it felt like I was there and the dialogue between a young girl and an old man who fears fridges was really poetic, strange, and echoes the challenges of being human and dealing with hardship. 10/10
— Feb 22, 2026 02:20PM
This was a beautiful slow burn scene that introduced 3 completely new characters in a full circle scene. Imagery of a bonfire on a beach in the winter was written so well that it felt like I was there and the dialogue between a young girl and an old man who fears fridges was really poetic, strange, and echoes the challenges of being human and dealing with hardship. 10/10
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Jack Dittbrenner
is on page 69 of 147
Just finished the 3rd section - All gods children can dance.
About a guy raised by single mom who is a religious fanatic and says his father was god himself. This passage delves into some uncharted mental territory - the man’s attraction to his own mother and his mother’s sort of abusive and crazy behavior. In the end, he follows a man who he thinks is his father and instead discovers something far more profound
— Feb 22, 2026 11:24PM
About a guy raised by single mom who is a religious fanatic and says his father was god himself. This passage delves into some uncharted mental territory - the man’s attraction to his own mother and his mother’s sort of abusive and crazy behavior. In the end, he follows a man who he thinks is his father and instead discovers something far more profound
Jack Dittbrenner
is on page 25 of 147
Finished the UFO chapter! Like the slice of life quality to this book alongside the absurdity of the main characters situation so far and how he seems so go with the flow !
— Feb 17, 2026 06:05PM
