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ren
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"Get off me. By the wrist and the hair on my head. I'm. No this isn't. No I. Slap. My brother. No. Shut up. Shut up. My brother died. He's died he's. I don't care a single fuck about. Where's your uncle is he here? Is he here? Scream until I. He. That means no. Enough of that and strike. So hard. Home. On my face. Spew I think of blood or words I bit down on my tongue. Turn the eye off it won't. He punch the bag me."
— Feb 23, 2026 12:51PM
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ren
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"Where I have. Rotten. Been. Where we have. Brother and. Brother and. Go round my head. Simple as it was. Gone. Wrong. Where my hands are. Hold out for me. Hold. I never asked I never did I. Moving. Don't see through you. Is silent and blank. Don't.
Don't forget me because I won't be long. I'm going walking. Over the stones. Close out the cold door. On me. My love. Close out those old stones."
— 52 minutes ago
Don't forget me because I won't be long. I'm going walking. Over the stones. Close out the cold door. On me. My love. Close out those old stones."
ren
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"...Well my girl, you may look down your nose at my beliefs and friends but I wasn't out throwing myself on every man passing while my brother was dying.
You are disgusting. You are. Sick in the head. How you've lived. This filth you've made of yourself.
So now your good kind brother is gone and God forgive me but it's true.
I almost wish it was you lying there in that box.
You. And not. My. Son."
— 2 hours, 34 min ago
You are disgusting. You are. Sick in the head. How you've lived. This filth you've made of yourself.
So now your good kind brother is gone and God forgive me but it's true.
I almost wish it was you lying there in that box.
You. And not. My. Son."
ren
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"You have shamed yourself and me and your brother's most of all. I can't even look at you. I haven't wanted you in my home. But I allowed you because I thought you were making amends. But not you. Of course not. Selfish to the last. You couldn't even let your brother's wake pass without making a show of yourself, showing everyone your contempt..."
— 2 hours, 36 min ago
ren
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"Where's my brother? She says I've had enough nough to last a lifetime. Ma. Your brother's dead my girl. Lying stretched out in there as you know well. Left behind in. Your brother's dead and all you can think about is. Before everyone you came here and displayed yourself looking for sympathy. From me? From me? You dirty... I've only so much patience and I've bitten my tongue too long."
— 2 hours, 39 min ago
ren
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"I. In this house of. I am left behind.
Is your face sore?
Not too.
Teach you what. Teach you to walking all times of day and night.
House I am left behind.
Yes Mammy.
You're a disgrace.
I am. I am.
If your father was.
House I am left behind in. If your. I am sit. Curl table body and face.
Sit up while I'm talking.
I'n mammy I. Feel my ebb to the grass and tea with leaves I'n. Going.
Sit up I said. Sit up."
— 2 hours, 49 min ago
Is your face sore?
Not too.
Teach you what. Teach you to walking all times of day and night.
House I am left behind.
Yes Mammy.
You're a disgrace.
I am. I am.
If your father was.
House I am left behind in. If your. I am sit. Curl table body and face.
Sit up while I'm talking.
I'n mammy I. Feel my ebb to the grass and tea with leaves I'n. Going.
Sit up I said. Sit up."
ren
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"Stag i can't stan i cn.an't stan i fall down on the splish of the water run it. See my invisible face. i'm drowned i'm awake i'm drowned. No your brother is and not you.
Clickedy click the lights are off. Are on. Water take all. Boil up. i slip in the deep. My face go under there. Purple waves and taste of foam.
You. No. Not here. i'm burn."
— Feb 24, 2026 03:30PM
Clickedy click the lights are off. Are on. Water take all. Boil up. i slip in the deep. My face go under there. Purple waves and taste of foam.
You. No. Not here. i'm burn."
ren
is finished
"Go she says and have a bath. Lie down and later someone'll take you to get a stitch in that.
I open the door look at. You're awake saying what's gone on you're not. I wish. You were."
— Feb 24, 2026 02:40PM
I open the door look at. You're awake saying what's gone on you're not. I wish. You were."
ren
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"What are you on about? Your lies and lies are. Have you no shame? Mammy. All my shame I give to you. I'm turning off the lights I'm shutting down my doors. What do you mean by that? Don't turn your back on me. What do you mean? Nothing Mammy. I've had enough do you hear me? Enough of you. Your face. You're a state. Making a show of yourself on today of all days."
— Feb 24, 2026 02:28PM
ren
is finished
"I'm screaming in the blackness. Scream until I'm done my body. Full of nothing. Full of dirt the. I am. My I can. There there breath that. Where is your face off somewhere. Where am I lay down this tool. I fall I felled. I banged my face head I think. Time for somewhere. Isgoinghome.
I get there I get. I get to the door. I am. Bleed blood on my mouth. Gone. My I know it's there. Was. Salt and iron. Gone."
— Feb 24, 2026 02:16PM
I get there I get. I get to the door. I am. Bleed blood on my mouth. Gone. My I know it's there. Was. Salt and iron. Gone."
ren
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"Don't I come all mouth of blood of choking of he there bitch there bithc there there stranlge me strangle how you like it how you think it is fun grouged breath sacld my lungs til I. Puk blod over me frum. In the next but. Let me air. Soon I'n dead I'm sre. Loose. Ver the aIrWays. Here. mY nose my mOuth I. VOMit. Clear. CleaR. He stopS up gETs. Stands uP.
Thanks to your uncle for that like the best fuck I ever had."
— Feb 24, 2026 01:30PM
Thanks to your uncle for that like the best fuck I ever had."
