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is 70% done
started to realize that ms harrow employs the template "metaphor/simile, explanation of metaphor/simile" quite a lot in this book and every time it happens it briefly takes me out of the story.
for the most recent example: "we went through time like a needle through fabric, and a needle doesn't count the stitches." like yes harrow,,, i couldve got what you were going for just from the simile.
— Mar 02, 2026 08:02AM
for the most recent example: "we went through time like a needle through fabric, and a needle doesn't count the stitches." like yes harrow,,, i couldve got what you were going for just from the simile.

