Joy’s Reviews > The Hurricane Wars > Status Update

I think this would have benefited with one of their fights being the prologue, then jump to the treaty and training. Then, they could have shown their history and the info dumping as flashbacks. Because I feel like I had to quite a lot for the story to start happening.

Alright, finally, stuff is happening, and I'm intrigued.

I won't lie. I'm getting a little bored. I hope this picks up