Rhiannon’s Reviews > Masquerade > Status Update

Why is this suddenly about ivory.

I know I keep going on about it but the number of typos in this book is shocking. There's plenty of stuff on AO3 which has undergone more rigourous and effective editing.

"There is no way an entire guild of blacksmiths befell misfortune."

You're fucking right there's not. A misfortune could, however, befall an entire guild of blacksmiths.

Good god this book is shite.

I nearly called it a day on page 42 because this is really not a well-written book, both in terms of actual writing and of what the words are saying.
I mean, it's taken the space of half a chapter for our heroine to be kidnapped and just, like, resign herself to getting married to the king - a man about whom she knows nothing except he has a nice smile and a silly hat. That's literally it.