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is 32% done
I'm not sure how I feel about this. 🤔
The writing is a little chaotic. The dialogue doesn't flow, and it isn't natural. Plus, I am not a fan of Luna. There are moments she seems really smart, and then she is dumb so the plot can happen. Yeah, this may be a DNF for me. Shame.
— Mar 05, 2026 12:53PM
The writing is a little chaotic. The dialogue doesn't flow, and it isn't natural. Plus, I am not a fan of Luna. There are moments she seems really smart, and then she is dumb so the plot can happen. Yeah, this may be a DNF for me. Shame.
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