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Starlight
is 97% done
There’s a soon to be mature or legal kid
Kalvar? A tiger something person who everyone seems to be prejudiced against, seen and treated as lower class
Tobi, one of the adopted kids
Is also some kind of shaman with powerful entities within him
Idk
He healed kalvar
But soemthing about ppl thanking tobi is a thing
It’s unclear
And I’m hating the random inserts of lore and character and world building
— Mar 07, 2026 05:21PM
Kalvar? A tiger something person who everyone seems to be prejudiced against, seen and treated as lower class
Tobi, one of the adopted kids
Is also some kind of shaman with powerful entities within him
Idk
He healed kalvar
But soemthing about ppl thanking tobi is a thing
It’s unclear
And I’m hating the random inserts of lore and character and world building
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Starlight
is 99% done
More thoughts and rants but
Bleh
Heart or soul of the station made a deal with the fmc
Blah blah blah
Also idk how old she is I was wrong
It’s waystation 27
Not that she is
I don’t think
Bleh
— Mar 07, 2026 05:23PM
Bleh
Heart or soul of the station made a deal with the fmc
Blah blah blah
Also idk how old she is I was wrong
It’s waystation 27
Not that she is
I don’t think
Bleh
Starlight
is 98% done
^like I don’t want expositions
But ugh
Rn idek if it’ll be brought up ever again
Or if it was just information that popped up conveniently
Idek rn
I’ve been feeling off and out of sorts
Pissed beyond reason
I’m not feeling charitable
— Mar 07, 2026 05:22PM
But ugh
Rn idek if it’ll be brought up ever again
Or if it was just information that popped up conveniently
Idek rn
I’ve been feeling off and out of sorts
Pissed beyond reason
I’m not feeling charitable
Starlight
is 96% done
I predict
Or rather
Hoping
The girls parents or family will come into play after they get the package
It’s depressing
Lots of things this books casually glosses over too quickly
And some things lingers on too long
Bleh
There’s also the recluse in the castle
Forgot his name
The lesbians-who adopted two of the kids
— Mar 07, 2026 05:18PM
Or rather
Hoping
The girls parents or family will come into play after they get the package
It’s depressing
Lots of things this books casually glosses over too quickly
And some things lingers on too long
Bleh
There’s also the recluse in the castle
Forgot his name
The lesbians-who adopted two of the kids
Starlight
is 95% done
So on the trip back to the station
Two kids , the luminescent ones
Sisters from an ocean planet
Died
Sadly
A likely
Evil all council shithead alistair killed them
She did manage to grab some of their dust or ash
Later turned into locks of hair
And what’s his face is mailing them home
Hopefully
— Mar 07, 2026 05:17PM
Two kids , the luminescent ones
Sisters from an ocean planet
Died
Sadly
A likely
Evil all council shithead alistair killed them
She did manage to grab some of their dust or ash
Later turned into locks of hair
And what’s his face is mailing them home
Hopefully
Starlight
is 94% done
Oh during the trip to this place
Fmc was adrift for a bit and brushed by a chaos pocket
Now she’s got chaos thorns on one side of her face
Minus one when what’s his face pulled it out of her
Minus another when she stuck one into griffin
They’re pieces of her life
Months or years
Voren had them too
— Mar 07, 2026 05:15PM
Fmc was adrift for a bit and brushed by a chaos pocket
Now she’s got chaos thorns on one side of her face
Minus one when what’s his face pulled it out of her
Minus another when she stuck one into griffin
They’re pieces of her life
Months or years
Voren had them too
Starlight
is 93% done
Let’s see who else
Fmc and what’s his face have to follow Evra to a prison planet bc she kind of betrayed the fmc
But it was to save her younger sister
Luckily sister and other kids were taken in by the ex
Kaden
Prison world is a shit place and full of shit ppl.
They escape
And make friends with the Meerkin
Bear sized somethings
Voren their leader
Tragic backstories
They make it home
— Mar 07, 2026 05:13PM
Fmc and what’s his face have to follow Evra to a prison planet bc she kind of betrayed the fmc
But it was to save her younger sister
Luckily sister and other kids were taken in by the ex
Kaden
Prison world is a shit place and full of shit ppl.
They escape
And make friends with the Meerkin
Bear sized somethings
Voren their leader
Tragic backstories
They make it home
Starlight
is 94% done
The ex is Kaden
An enforcer
Idk if he’s some other alien
There’s his friend and fellow enforcer
The goofy playful joking
Damn forgot his name
He likes Evra the Amazon and fmcs new assistant or something
— Mar 07, 2026 05:11PM
An enforcer
Idk if he’s some other alien
There’s his friend and fellow enforcer
The goofy playful joking
Damn forgot his name
He likes Evra the Amazon and fmcs new assistant or something
Starlight
is 93% done
^gets off the bus and eventually finds her way to some other parallel dimension
The waystation
Meets the soon to be former guardian of said station
The bitch dips out and leaves the fmc to take her place
She meets Griffin the avatar she names
Who everyone keeps treating like a servant and less than a sentient being deserving of decency and respect
A mystery with an ex who ghosted her
— Mar 07, 2026 05:10PM
The waystation
Meets the soon to be former guardian of said station
The bitch dips out and leaves the fmc to take her place
She meets Griffin the avatar she names
Who everyone keeps treating like a servant and less than a sentient being deserving of decency and respect
A mystery with an ex who ghosted her
Starlight
is 92% done
Character recaps
Fmc is Nyx Fortuna
27 and human, maybe
Woke up with amnesia one day with a note taped to her hand telling her she’s got a place to live for a limited time before money or rent runs out
Enrolled in college for whatever course - it wasn’t clear or I forgot
Tried to leave
Already forgot where
Bumfuck nowhere
Until she got on a bus and rode until the blood and pain was unbearable
— Mar 07, 2026 05:07PM
Fmc is Nyx Fortuna
27 and human, maybe
Woke up with amnesia one day with a note taped to her hand telling her she’s got a place to live for a limited time before money or rent runs out
Enrolled in college for whatever course - it wasn’t clear or I forgot
Tried to leave
Already forgot where
Bumfuck nowhere
Until she got on a bus and rode until the blood and pain was unbearable
Starlight
is 91% done
The lack of editing is so fucking apparent
I’d say the writing is mostly decent
Which is why all those incorrect grammars and mess ups stood out so much like a sore thumb covered in shit and flies
— Mar 07, 2026 05:05PM
I’d say the writing is mostly decent
Which is why all those incorrect grammars and mess ups stood out so much like a sore thumb covered in shit and flies
