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Monte Machida
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Artistic concept with characters with enough personality to keep dialogue sound realistic. Impressed with the world, though world building is not exciting. Trials have started, and tasks are difficult Teo creates an upheaval in its challenge.
This would make a great show
— Mar 07, 2026 09:25PM
This would make a great show
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Monte Machida
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Tiya’s character development has changed tenfold, as it shows that she has a deep caring heart and responds seriously to though she cares about such as Teo. The book has its flaws though its plot and climax are worth the time.
— Mar 08, 2026 04:48PM
Monte Machida
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Challenges in internally, new characters introducing new problems for Teo, I have understood after deeper reading that this is a separate world in the real world. Want a fan of technology being mentioned, though I understand now. Chaotic Jungle scene was crazy and very enjoyable
— Mar 08, 2026 10:07AM
Monte Machida
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High fantasy with decent world building, interesting heritage, and down to earth characters
— Mar 06, 2026 12:41PM
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Mar 07, 2026 09:44PM
I will add, Niya’s character REALLY doesn’t work for me. Potential for this story to have an interesting story, this should be based in older times. The modern writing style, using quips, social media remarks, and being reminded by Tiya’s vulgarity, certain moments are ruined. Tiya’s dialogue, personally, does make me wince. It’s hard to get through
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