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This book is very bad. Very, very bad. The dialogue is ridiculous. It goes on and on for pages, in circles, saying the same things over and over. It can be summarized like this: "We hump now." "I can't!" "We hump now." "I want to, but I can't." "I can hump you whether you want to or not, but I want you to." "I want to, but I can't!" And this is the "story." It's complete female fantasy.