Christina Martin’s Reviews > Confounding Oaths > Status Update
Christina Martin
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So far, the premise of this book is interesting but my main gripe like others lies in the unconventional narrator being far too present and serving as a distraction that breaks the pace and immersion frequently. The constant addressing the reader and breaking immersion to talk at length about unrelated events is confusing and annoying. The reliance on Miss /Mr. Titles is not good. 1st->3rd->1st perspective very bad
— Mar 08, 2026 01:59PM
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